That was Hilarious. Next step, Pokemon Snap XXX Flashgame lol
You have pretty good animation and drawing skills even though you get lazy at some points. Here are the things you did best and need to work on:
- Work on your backrounds. They are much too bland.
- When you did the 1st person view that was AWESOME - very cool and very good job... do more of that
- Your hero seems to be able to run foward into oncoming fire... and they are shooting him for like 5-10 secs at least while he's running straight at them without one bullet hitting. Make this more realistic - either show him somehow awesomely dodging the bullets or don't have him run straight into fire. But whatever you do - don't make it so unrealistic that you just show him running into fire and the enemy missing. That's lame.
- You had alot of good ideas to keep the flash interesting. The grenades, the first person view, the alleyway, everything else. Very innovative. Keep doing that.
The one question I have for you is, will there be a plot? Just wondering.
For everyone asking about episode 1 - give up.
I used to check his site "www.fallenangelseries.com" once in a while and he would say it's coming every 6 months or so and it still isn't here. If it ever does come - we won't know when until it does. (That is a horrible statement gramatically)
He definately has been working on it though - he's shown screenshots on his site before he put it on maintence. But don't expect any answers to your questions - he checks nothing nowadays.
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